I always have trouble with ‘transition’ scenes; those times when the hero is walking to the heroine’s house or the heroine is driving somewhere or they’re going to sleep. I want to skip when they’re in transition or rush by it somehow because it’s boring but, if I try and rush it, you can tell. On the other hand, if I write down every detail (he tied his shoes, grabbed his coat, put an arm in, then the other arm, zipped his coat shut…) the reader will probably throw my book on the floor then stomp on it for good measure.
So, what do I do? Luckily, though I have no idea, others do (yeey!).
Janice Hardy has a great article on how to skip time. She shows (with small examples) different types of techniques on how to move ahead. Check it out here. And here is another on transition scenes.
Skipping ahead of time is one of the ways to tighten up a book and not drag the reader through boring parts. Janice Hardy makes it look easy. A big thanks for those great articles!
I’ll need this one day…
You’re so positive! thank you!
This is why I love using multiple POVs, need to skip time go to another character.
Oh! So smart!! I love it!
Thank you, thank you, thank you. I needed this.
Oh, you’re so welcome! I’m glad it helped! It certainly helped me 🙂
Hardy’s article is really spot on! I’ve used so many of those techniques in my novel. Where was this article four years ago!
LOL. You’re so funny!